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In addition to writing the screenplay for the feature film , here is an update on prequels, sequels, etc. I've made less progress in this area than I envisioned at the start of the year. I'm about 70 pages into the sequel - "Vision Speak: Awakening" along with a vision/roadmap for where I'm taking this one. If interested, I'd be happy to send you a PDF and would love to get your feedback. You can reach out via this forum or contact form or email. Perhaps many of you can relate with this bizarre pandemic life we lead now... I find myself scattered, dabbling in a variety of creative initiatives - evolving my photography offerings on pixels, playing with encaustic, word burning and other art forms. Writing in bits and pieces... Taking a short class right now on drawing and watercolour which is not in my wheelhouse but interesting. FYI, there have been a number of edits/clean-up to the original Vision Speak manuscript based on lessons learned from your feedback during our sessions in early 2021 and in writing the screenplay. These updates are reflected in the version on Amazon. I tried to keep edits to a minimum and the story itself has not changed at all although a couple of minor, unnecessary characters have disappeared..

I finished the Vision Speak "feature film" screenplay. It took a lot longer (months) than I had originally envisioned. I've entered some competitions over the last month. Some provide feedback although most will not provide anything till late summer or fall. I did receive one formal feedback and some input from readers so have already edited it a couple of times since the early entries. I'm feeling better about the current version. Adapting a book into a screenplay is challenging as a feature screenplay should be between 80-125 pages (compared to 300-400 pages of the book). Also, it's all about what you see and hear on screen. If any of you are interested in reading the screenplay, I can send you a pdf. Let me know.. It's 119 pages.

Everyone is familiar with the theory of evolution (first documented in "On the Origin of Species" by Charles Darwin); however, there are also theories and bodies of work in recent decades on Conscious Evolution and how we, as a species, can evolve our spirits and minds to a next state.  By the end of the book, this is starting to happen and in the sequel, humanity's "Awakening" begins.  Do you believe that if we work together, humanity can connect in non-verbal ways that may lead to a more co-operative spirit?